[EN] update Platform as a service

[manojrayar]

Updated the file as requested, ref: #3036

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Updated the existing term Platform as a service.

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#3036

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[Okabe-Junya]

I am not an official reviewer for the English version, but...

It looks like you have two PRs open for the PaaS page - the other is #3127. One page is sufficient. It would be better to close one of them, thanks

[iamNoah1]

Thanks @manojrayar Nice update on this term. I only have some minor suggestions.

[iamNoah1]

I would love to see a bit more information about how PaaS helps. Everything you said is correct, maybe we can add a bit more about that it utilizes IaaS or bare metal directly to dedicate infrastructure resources. Also maybe we can add that we talk about abstractions and that we have an interface for using a PaaS that abstracts everything away.

[manojrayar]

Hi @iamNoah1 , i have updated the file according to your inputs, kindly check and review.

[iamNoah1]

@manojrayar Thanks for the ping and patience.

I understand what you did. You put the information in Which Problem it solves section which is not the correct place. The text in the Which Problem it solves section was fine before. You can put your added text to the how it helps section.

And I would remove the following sentence as it feels redundant: is abstraction allows companies to focus on application development without being burdened by the intricacies of managing the underlying technology

[manojrayar]

Hi @iamNoah1 , Friendly ping.

[iamNoah1]

Thanks @manojrayar got some feedback :)

[iamNoah1]

@manojrayar Thanks for the ping and patience.

I understand what you did. You put the information in Which Problem it solves section which is not the correct place. The text in the Which Problem it solves section was fine before. You can put your added text to the how it helps section.

And I would remove the following sentence as it feels redundant: is abstraction allows companies to focus on application development without being burdened by the intricacies of managing the underlying technology

[nate-double-u]

Thanks for this @manojrayar, and thank you for your patience in this process. I'm going to close this PR as stale given @iamNoah1 has asked for changes that haven't been addressed.

Please feel free to reopen this if you have time to work on it again in future.